wanna be there..

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Just wanna stand on a peak
high above the world,
with the wind blowing on my face
and my hair dancing
just wanna stay there all alone
the sun settting far away
silence all around except
the song the wind whispers in my ear
nothing to do but
stand there and be one with the wind
just close my eyes and stand,
feel the closeness to the heavens
with my feet on the ground
the music the wind plays
makin me dance with joy.
will it be any less than paradise..?
i wanna be in paradise

Comments

tanvi said…
Hi that was a nice poem I could identify with the sentiment. Good you dropped on my blog so you think I write a lot I say its initial euphoria of a beginner exploring new territory. You must have gone the same way when you started anyhow I didnt know whether to take wat you said as a compliment or a complaint Not that I care :-)If its a compliment you are welcome to read more if a complain well dont visit. I dont mean to be rude. I like ur stuff here.
11:24 AM
tanvi said…
And hey you write a lot too:-)
11:27 AM
Advitiya said…
Nice pome...
2:01 PM
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